Coming Soon.
to express how I feel-
there is a candle and there is a flame
I am neither
I am the wick
between passion and pain
love is explicit
and exploitation is abundant
I am tired and dry
yet I remain hers and she remains his
so nothing is really mine
I am implurable and sultry
but my sex appeal does not offer hope
because I know in the end when she leaves me
i'll be reduced to nothing but a burning rope.
Love the poem its really hard to read though!!! Amazing though
ReplyDeletethanks.. it's kinda metaphoric.. so it's iffy. lol
ReplyDeleteIt's not hard to read at all, it's also very good. It reads a bit like song lyrics though, if you look into meter a bit more, I think it will flow better.
ReplyDeleteI got it! It was actually easy to understand!
ReplyDelete[= thanks guys/gals. yeah i don't really know much about poetry. i just like making it flow. and making it metaphoric. [= but like, what i am good at is writing prose. check it out. (:
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